Individualized Error Report

Frequent errors I notice in my writing is the flow of proposing my information. When jumping from one idea to another, I have trouble keeping a flow that readers can follow. An example of this, in project 3, I related Turkle’s reading to my own life experiences; while I was writing, my ideas were all over the place. Whether this was the piece that included Turkle’s reading, or my experience, the words to create a flow between the two was difficult. How I made an effort to change this was speaking my sentences out loud separately to make sure there was a clear understanding. This took many tries of rewriting the same message but in a different way. This made it much easier for me to start a flow and continue the same strategy for future writings.